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Takuhei Mizutani
Grade 9
Theater Arts
Critique on Jasons and Islas Play

I would like to say that write a rule book for a play is hard enough but writing your first script would dumbfound been even harder. I position that their play was polished although a little rough somewhat the edges.
To start off, I opinion that the actors did a second-rate short letter of acting and showed actions and expressions that were clear. In my opinion, Dylan did a great job as he did a superb job in maintaining his role. He had good expressions, actions that were understandable and a clear voice in which I could hear everything. Santa, who was played by Aman did a fair job however he lacked on that he wasnt to lively and his voice was being projected enough. I thought that when the homeless people were starting to sing, it was a nice sectionalisation because they it warmed your heart thinking that even if they didnt cause anything, they just needed the Christmas spirit. I also thought that the directors themselves should stand been in their play because they wrote it so in my opinion; the plan should devote revolved on them.
Next, I thought the secret plan was rather enigmatic. I thought of this because at first when Dylans character says that after 40 years had passed, he had constitute a homeless man.



I thought that this had needed to a greater extent details and specifics let the audience know what happened so a brief summary of what happened in-between the 40 years would have made the story clear. Another part that was confusing was that although Santa had promised Amans character that he would be granted one wish, he never got it because it seemed to me, that Santa had not fulfilled his wish. The last part that was confusing to me was when Santa had disguised himself and went to where the homeless people gathered. I thought that they should have used a different character or something to pick out Santa and when he disguises himself. However, all in all, apart from these parts, I couldnt find any more parts in the diagram of...If you want to get a full essay, order it on our website: Orderessay



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