The pain inside me grows and manifests. It is here to stay, as if frozen in time. the burning, the agony, constantly growing, aching, stinging, like nothing Ive ever felt beforehand. The wourld slightly me fades in and out. Colours, so vibrant, so vivid, exagerated by my pain, unfairnessen to black. The dark holds no distractions to focus on, solo the immense torture my form is subjected to. Colours return as bright as before immeadiately wash out into brilliant white light. Not healing, burning. No escape the world comes back. Colour. Worried faces surround me, so close, I cannot breath. The pain becomes concentrated and confined to my chest. Growing so intense, my limbs be relieved, the pain has left them. My chest screams. Oxygen evacuates my lungs never to return. each(prenominal) sound is dimmed, colour begins to fade, movement slows down. All is false the only thing that remains in the pain in my chest, so intense and growing. Concentrated I no longer embody except the pain growing still. It is unbearable. Stop!
This was a steady-going gentleman that brought out a different style in writers. Maybe it was intended for poem, nevertheless all in all, this piece was good, and it is here to stay. Good rating for creative writing!!
Dark, mystical, creative, eerie. further a few words to describe the public opinions created by honourable reading this essay. Excellent. Succinct and wonderful!
there is no u in world, but that was probably just a typo. I love ur ideas.
The subscriber line between the dark and vibrant colours is great it is sincerely different to the dulling pain which people usually expect to experience.
This is a short piece of writting with many good points as hearty as bad. For example of the badare, some spelling errors and it was very short, by chance the purpose of it was to be short, but i dont no. stock-still it was dark, eerie and very good. It brings a lot of personal feeling to it, this is a talent that is quite hard to find inside story writers. Yet, all the same, you did a good job, well through!
nicely written. Full of spirit and emotions. Appeals to the feelings of others. Sound like a poetry though.
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